Poetry is not a profession, it is a destiny. Mikhail Dudan
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POPPING POEMS AT MIDNIGHT
by
Jamie Dedes
There must be something about
the witching hour, magic after all,
when – from sound sleep – I so
suddenly awake to the silent
scratching and rough shaking
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of a poem dropping in, uninvited
and just about fully formed, from
some unnamed peculiar heaven or
hell to disturb the languid luxury of
this rare blue somnolence. A poem
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from neither the horn nor ivory
gate that snatches me from the
welcome arms of Morpheus, from
the land of Demos Oneiroi*, where
I long – an elegant ache – to return.
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I chew on it like a baby chews
new food, trying to define shape
and character, to hold the memory
intact until morning when I can –
perhaps – name it. I … repeat it …
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repeating, repeating, my mind
wrapping itself around the poem
like my arms the pillow, hugging
the sensation of it, enjoying the
silk and nub and color of it, not
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willing to let it go, unable to sleep.
At a chill pre-dawn hour, give
up and get up and taking the laptop
in hand, lay out the poem on a fresh
white page, ready post of the day.
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* Demos Oneiroi – the land of dreams
Artwork – Morpheus and Iris by Pierre-Narcisse Guérin, 1811
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INTO THE BARDO
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A lovely poem…and so true. How often do I lie half awake with a poem in my mind..wonderful capture. I wrote a sonnet (not a great one!) to this picture too…http://poeticdelusions.com/2011/05/05/sleepers/ Thank you for the sharing. 🙂
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Thanks! … and thanks for the link to your exquisite poem …
Jamie
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My time seems to be 3:00 a.m. Suddenly wide awake, as though someone touched me, my thoughts turn to the spiritual. I feel deeply immersed in my spiritual life. A few years ago, a First Nations Medicine Woman told me that her culture believes this is the time when the spirit world wants to connect. I have not sensed that for me, but I sent her a vision I received that I strongly felt was for her. She seemed greatly pleased even though it came from a non-native. She and I have laugh about our white/redness. It is such a moot point with each of us.
It would be grand to have it all come out as a poem. But then…that is a destiny. 🙂
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This is interesting. Thanks for sharing the story here. I also have been told that 3 a.m. is a special time and often wake up then too, even when I’ve been awake at midnight!
Your destiny is your wonderful stories. Story telling an old and respectable art. A true blessing for which we are grateful, Amy.
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It is because of Louise’s lovely poem that I ended up here. How delectable your words flowed on my tongue. A beautiful poem indeed. I hope more poems like these get popped at midnight. They have such a special quality.
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What a gracious thing to say. Thank you!
Jamie
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love the triumph in the end, time to post and show off with confidence.
Happy Picnic.
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your words inspire.
well expressed writing experience, thanks for sharing..
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Thank you!
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a little gem, superb imagery.
😉
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Thanks, Tree.
Jamie
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love your new blog template.
How are you today?
Happy end of November!
Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,
Hope to see you share today,
A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.
Your talent rocks.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox
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Thanks, Morning. I have just been so busy, busy – but I haven’t forgotten about you. Will retrn to activities as soon as I am free from other responsiblities.
Hope you and yours are well.
Warmest regards,
Jamie
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