WHAT OF MOTHER?
by
Jamie Dedes
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Still living at the edge of forever
in hazy seas of hoary clouds and
from this place we crawled, oh
eons ago, out of her briny womb
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to sit and sun, warming on rocks
and moving our lives to shores
roaring with sound and surf
casting its wealth of sea shells
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and seaweed. Onward, inward to
further depths of earth, granite,
lava-flows and flower-decked
valleys, dancing once with bird
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and bear, sharing an arborous
roof, green, gold, and welcome.
So grateful too and good at our
husbandry. All thrived. Often now
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crass, careless … soulless,
offending blues-black burdens
of abuse. Maybe too thankless,
some children, de-spirited and
possibly doomed to roiling sea.
What then of this treasure:
Mother Earth.
Photo credit – Peter Griffin, Public Domain Pictures.net.


your poems always steal my breath!
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Thank you for your kind words, Trisha!
Jamie
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I love that part about “briny womb” and then “to sit and sun, warming on rocks”. Wow! “offending blues-black burden”. This should be sung, believed and heeded, turning our lives around. Beautiful, Jamie.
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Thanks, Leslie! Appreciate your kind words.
Jamie
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stunning…
lovely job.
A++
🙂
Bless you.
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Thanks, Ji, and blessings to you too!
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Well-written, elegant
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i so adored this poem! thank you!
Jamie
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Thanks, Mia. I’m pleased you like it. And thanks for all of your fine work.
Jamie
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Very captivating. I almost read it in one breath!
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That sounds so you, Hema! Thanks!
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So true! I love the journey and the picture painted here, with such truth and concern. Great job Jamie!
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Thanks, Marliie-I. Always value you opinion and support.
Jamie
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Your poems always tell something that has deeply affected you. Among the treasured memories of sea and sky is ABUSE. I dare not ask. Confront it and heal it with forgiveness for your own sake. Blessings.
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Not abuse of me. Abuse of the environment, Luz! Thanks for your visit and comment.
Jamie
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Fantastic work and a plea for our dear mother Earth.
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It’s preaching to the choir though, isn’t it? 😦
Jamie
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Loved this Jamie. Broadening Mother’s day to include the mother of us all, Mother Earth.
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Thanks, Rob!
Jamie
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Love this one Jamie, lovely.
Hugs
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Thank you, Meiro! Not one of my best, but the day inspires something…
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wow…powerful 🙂
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