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Every year without knowing it I have passed the day
When the last fires will wave to me
And the silence will set out
For the Anniversary of My Death, W.S. Merwin, The Second Four Books of Poems
FROM THE BEGINNING
by
Jamie Dedes
It was yesterday
that I retrieved my soul at last
moved by the placid persuasion of a psalm
reminding me of my rootedness
in the archives of heaven
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In earlier times
life lay ahead, a rhythm of reciting tones
a paced chant before all that somber news
and facing facts and quiet homely work
of peacemaking for your sake
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But this morning
I awoke a fading mendicant nun
reading my own rich requiem Mass
celebrating my heart’s trove
and your constant love
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A few more breaths
and I’m a whisper in your ear
an old story of someone who birthed you
now melting into the great Forever
leaving us only a hallowed cord
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From the beginning, Son
your spirit was to us a joy dancing
a perfect poem finely etched in old gold
holding fast to beauty and grace
faithful to your own gentle spirit
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Listen to the hollows in the wind.
Listen, Son –
how love encircles and
echoes from the small Beginning ….
into the great Forever

BEAUTIFUL!
Oh this one touches my heart and everything attached…so lovely
Jaye
lovely—again I had to write it…
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This touched my mother’s heart.
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Such a lovely piece… truly touching!
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stunning, thanks for sharing…
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Beautiful expression of faith and love. I really liked ” your spirit was to us a joy dancing / a perfect poem finely etched in old gold”
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Thank you, Mario.
Jamie
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So moving, ethereal, but firmly rooted in the great truth..today, the 3rd anniversary of my Mom’s passing into the Sacred…this poem sums it up..
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Lynn, I’m glad it was meaningful to you. I’m sorry about your mom. Takes a long time to heal. Not sure the grieving ever is over.
Jamie
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Wonderful message, beautifully delivered!
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Thanks, Charles!
Jamie
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I think this is one of your best, Jamie. It is so poignant and emotive, and rendered with just the right touch. I loved the flow of it and
“how love encircles and
echoes from the small Beginning ….
into the great Forever.” are my favorite lines. Truly beautiful piece.
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Thanks, Corina! A treasured comment from you. 🙂
Jamie
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Being one who was never close to his mother, this was such a fascinating read
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I’m wondering in what sense “facinating.”
I’m sorry to know your weren’t close to your mom, Anthony.
Jamie
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Very calm and moving. I like it.
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Thanks, Morganna! 🙂
Jamie
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This is so beautiful. I have read 3 times and will again.
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Thank you, Luz! Nice thing to know …
Jamie
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Beautiful piece of poetry
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Thank you, Jeanie. Pleased that you like it.
Jamie
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But this morning
I awoke a fading mendicant nun
reading my own rich requiem Mass
celebrating my heart’s trove
and your constant love
A few more breaths
and I’m a whisper in your ear
an old story of someone who birthed you
now melting into the great Forever
leaving us only a hallowed cord
A remarkable piece, reflecting the joy and sorrow that permeates family relationships. There is a great sense of the way that we are each held within one another. The mother holds the possibilities of the child then the child holds the legacy of the mother. Lovely!
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That’s a lovely and on-target summary, Anna. Thank you. I’m touched.
Jamie
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Wow! Really beautiful and moving poem
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A simply beautiful piece! Love the last stanza!
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Thank you, dear Tekla.
Jamie
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