
As the day evolves
from overcast
to sun to rain again,
the Artisan steps in
and brushes clouds
across blue skies—
wet-on-wet—
then takes a rag
and smears,
sprinkling sadness
into an otherwise
perfect moment.
We are anticipating some rain this weekend in the drought-stricken California desert, so actually it’s a reason for celebration if it makes it over the mountains.
© 2014, poem, Victoria C.Slotto, All rights reserved
VICTORIA C. SLOTTO (Victoria C. Slotto, Author: Fiction, Poetry and Writing Prompts) ~ is an accomplished writer and poet. Winter is Past, published by Lucky Bat Books in 2012, is Victoria’s first novel. A second novel is in process. On Amazon and hot-off-the-press nonfiction is Beating the Odds: Support for Persons with Early Stage Dementia. Victoria’s ebooks (poetry and nonfiction) are free to Amazon Prime Members. Link HERE for Victoria’s Amazon page.
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Yes rain has come this way too in buckets…so desperately needed. A beautiful poem written with such a gentle touch. I very much enjoyed.
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Love your poem Victoria. May your area be blessed with rain. It would seem we are in a drought too, but nothing like you folks. Actually, I needed the weather man to announce it for me to know.
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This was written a while back and unfortunately, no rain in the future…and a fire nearby with high winds this week. Thank you for the kind comments.
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I love the rhythm of this poem as well as the way it paints the picture, literally. Essence in brevity. Brava, Victoria!
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