merciful goddess
such compassionate goodness
(womanly essence)
embodies your soul
melds eastern and western world
cherry blossoms rain
– Victoria C. Slotto
© 2015, poem, Victoria C. Slotto, All rights reserve; photograph, David Slotto, All rights reserved

It’s lovely. But it’s also only six short lines –could nobody be bothered to correct the two glaring errors?
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I wish I could fix sch emboides, alas, I am not the goddess.
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A sweet poem, Victoria, and what a nice job David did on the photograph. It made me smile.
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Errors corrected, I believe. Please review.
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