what must it be like for you in your part of the world?
there is only silence, I don’t know your name, i know only
that the fire of life makes us one in this, the human journey,
search and return, reaching for the sun, running through mud
walking the gauntlet without a prayer or a blessing
our eyes meet in secret, our hearts open on the fringe,
one breath and the wind blows, one tear and seas rise,
on the street where you live, your friends are all gone
the houses are crushed and the doves have flown
there is only silence, no children playing, no laughter
here and there a light remains to speak to you of loneliness,
my breath caught in my throat, i want to make it sane again
“Sometime they’ll give a war and nobody will come.”
Carl Sandburg (1878-1967), American poet, writer, and editor
– Jamie Dedes
©2013, poem, Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved, Photo courtesy of morgueFile
JAMIE DEDES (The Poet by Day)~ I am a mom and a medically retired (disabled) elder. The graces of poetry, art, music, writing and reading continue to evolve as a sources of wonder and solace, as a creative outlet, and as a part of my spiritual practice.
Moving words, Jamie! Deeply touching.
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“one tear and seas rise” … that phrase is gripping me.
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I refuse to think of you as an ‘elder,’ perhaps because that would make me one, too. (reference Glorias’s recent email.)
Keep up your good work!
Linda
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Jamie … this is so very tough. I feel all that you say here. I am grateful for the lovely photo for it somewhat cushions the pain of your words.
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So emotive. Beautifully expressed, Jamie.
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@ Victoria, Liz, Pricilla and Niamh Thank you for your gentle responses.
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